Following a critical discussion with my tutor, the following
evaluative thoughts were given and shown. The subject I have given fits in to a
school environment, and can be easily researched. It is a topical subject, and
is hot from a media point of view. To improve, I should be more descriptive of
my location, give more detail about what the location looks like, etc. I should
give the main character a name, and physicalize what he is doing, and also
introduce other characters. I should not write from the directors’ voice, I should
write visually what we see, for example, what they are wearing. This links to
improving my mis-en-scene, by describing the costumes, costume elements,
hairstyles, and other notable factors about the characters. I also should make
the characters look how they behave, and make it economically challenged if
need be. I need to insert a new row in the table, for the locations of these
scenes are different. If I want to use a copyrighted audio track, I must get
permission from the record label to use the track, by emailing the record label
via using their customer services email on their website. Another option for
this is Garage Band, which can help me compose audio similar to the song I want
to use. I need to do more with editing, by perhaps using parallel and cross
cutting editing.
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